The Fight for Life—Part 1

Sword_fight_2I wrote a story in my class room last year and I wanted to share it with you. Here’s part one and be on the look out for parts two through five. Please leave me a comment and tell me what you think.



The Fight for Life—Part 1

I woke up and I was trapped in a small room. I was so dizzy I couldn’t see where

I was.  When I finally got out it was cold and I couldn’t breath. I decided to go back in the small room which I found out was a rocket ship.

I found a bowl and put it over my head.  When I finally went out of the rocket ship I realized I was on Mars.  In the distance I saw hundreds of big lizard things.  I started to run away but I found out that the lizards were super fast so they caught up to me. 

I screamed, “You can’t catch me.”  They grabbed me and pulled me to the ground and stuck a needle in my arm and it made me pass out.  When I woke up I was in the middle of a green, oozy town.  I asked where I was and some guy said I was in the city of shniskabible.  A big lizard picked me up and brought me to a dungeon. 

I started to scream,”Put me down” and the lizard said, “Yeah right”.  The lizard then chained me to the wall in the dungeon.

(Image credit:  Sword fight by Grafixar, licensed Creative Commons:  Attribution)


About Bill Ferriter

I'm a real-live, bona-fide, full-time practicing classroom teacher. #takeTHAT
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2 Responses to The Fight for Life—Part 1

  1. Shakesphere says:

    No! don’t stop there! What happens next! do you get eaten by the lizzard things, or do you somehow obtain a magical ray gun!
    Pee-Wee please post part 2 soon! and know that you have a big fan to read it


    AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!Please post part 2!I really want to see part2.

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