Maximus Drive part 2

“Finally, we’re here,”Maximus said. He was looking at a huge white building that said Swargenanner Company.”We have some buisness to do here”,said Maximus. He went inside the buiding. John followed him in.

Maximus touched a block in the brick wall and pushed the brick and a door in the side of the wall opened. The door had several runes on it. Maximus started to decode it using a special code book.”Go in if you dare at the risk of your life.”said Maximus. Maximus then used a an thermo device to see if there was any life forms. There were none.”Let’s go”, whispered Maximus. They walked in to be surrounded by hundreds of armed troops wearing thermo proof armor that was bulletproof.”We just walked into a trap,” said Maximus.

                        TO BE CONTINUED....

Sorry for releasing this late!!

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One Response to Maximus Drive part 2

  1. Cheesy McPheasy says:

    Hey WICKEDAWESOMENACHOMAN. I have been reading your series so far, and I think it’s ok. Only I have a few questions.
    First, is it an action, or a sci-fi, mystery, drama (blech)? And second I really wish you could make them longer. It seems to give so little information and so little excitement (Only I’m not sure if it’s supposed to be exciting, so I don’t know).
    However, you did give me an idea to wirte a James Bond review for the Blurb, so look out for that. Thanks for the idea, and sorry to be so negative.
    Cheesy McPheasy

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